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Shy timid smiles,
Heart beating fast,
Flushed color skin,
Sweating palms,
Shaky knees.

Not knowing how to react,
Not knowing how to tell the other how you feel,
Not knowing if it's real,
Not knowing if it's love or fate.

All the worried feelings you get,
On the first kiss you nearly missed,
You thought he could hear your heart,
You blush and hide behind your tears.

He smiles,
He plays with your hair,
He holds you,
Young love,
It happens to all of us.

You float in a cloud,
You sing in the rain,
Your heart's about to burst.

Young love,
It's within us,
It fulfills us,
It completes us,
Young love,
Found me.
Ok, I was really bored in PREP, since it's only the 2nd day of school and I finshed all my homework, I wrote this while trying to listen Alexis, Savannah, and Alex so it was kinda hard... IK it's not my best but oh well I kinda like it so tell me what you think!!!
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:iconkayla13138:
kayla13138 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008   Writer
awwww I love it! Its amazing!
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
thank you :D
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SephirothThePure Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2008
Wonderful, mandy. Absolutely wonderful.
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2008
thank you very much :D
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saddlebred44 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2008  Student Writer
i like it, but i don't understand why she is crying. could u explain?
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mandyc Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2008
she is crying because she is embrassed that she's blushing and she's really happy to be with him. and thanks! :D
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:iconsaddlebred44:
saddlebred44 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2008  Student Writer
no problem, :D
maybe you should explain that in the poem though, so people don't get confused.
suggesting only of course :)
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
well most ppl get it, u just have to really think lol, but thank you :D I appericate the help :D
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Forgottenangel777 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2008
It's cute. :) But what's it's saying about hiding behind your tears? Doesn't seem to fit, but still really good. :)
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mandyc Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2008
thank you and as I told my other friend. She is embrassed that she is blushing and she's really happy. thanks 4 the comment :D
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