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Dark eyes that are frightening but comforting at the same time,
A heart that can be warm or its core filled with ice,
Ears that can hear my heart pounding,
Fangs that can rip open my flesh.

Can fall in love but pay the price,
Wander in the night
Drink blood to satisfy their thirst,
Perfect in every way,
Have their horrid past and many different ways of taking it.

In the need of someone but prefer to be alone,
With tenderness underneath.

How long until we understand these creatures?
How long until the war of our worlds ends?
How much longer will we be blind?
There is so much more to a vampire than meets the eye.

The paleness of their skin,
The warmth of their body replaced with an icy feeling,
Each one has their own unique trait,
Every one has a weakness,
Every one has untold petinual.

Vampires what would so many people do without them?
Look behind those eyes,
Look behind their twisted minds,
Look behind their broken souls,
And you find a little piece of you,
Were all the same.

So much we still have to learn about you,
So much we need to understand,
What would we do without you?
Ok.. ik alot of you are thinking TWLIGHT!!! and some are thinking Vampire diaries but I like them both. I was thinking about Edward, Emment, Stefan and Damon... so yeah. I've always wanted to write a piece about Vampires and this what I got lol! :D
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Awebster7854 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Intresting poem. I always had a side for the art. 
Scarease Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Vampire are undead ,curse miss they soul or a part of it.and almost always hungery for and not all of them are pretty boy and girls .so before you make them sound like Inflicted people look up the 30 days of Night,Blade,or some real old movie and stories .
Redropp Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
very awesome, I'm no twilight fan or vampire diaries.
I'm a fan of the real thing.But you have some good points in here, keep up the good work.
MrLovelessss Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
real thing, you've met a vampire? 
Redropp Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thankfully no. I did do an extensive study on them though for a few years though. I very much think they are out their, but have yet to come across one.
I'm onto new studies now, far more interesting and frightening and easier to run into/identify.
MrLovelessss Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I guess that's good for you. If you don't mind me asking, what are you studying on now (Or have run into) 
Redropp Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Different things considering the supernatural. It's sorta more like home work at this point lol. I'm a pagan craft practitioner so I have to learn about this stuff. I've run into imps, fairies, demons, goblins, House elves, spirits/ghosts, etc. Much easier to find if you know where to look. Plus I get bored and this makes for interesting notes for later. Lots of books on them too, but it can be tough to find decent reputable ones with correct information regarding them. 
MrLovelessss Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hmmm I see. Sounds like hell of a hobby eh? (Or job or whatever you want to call it)
Redropp Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
It's closer to hobby than job. It's a large part of my "belief system" (I can't call it religion, because technically Pagansim is a belief or spirituality.) Part of it is knowing lore, and the things that have been here longer than man that lives in the shadows. Like as mentioned before it's things deemed "supernatural or paranormal".  Though there is a lot more to it then just that aspect. For me though it's one of the more interesting. 
Crazy4Wonderland Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I don't watch Twilight or the Vampire diaries. But this was great.

Twilight kind of ruined the whole concept of "Vampires" for me. In truth I think their really cool creatures and I kind of believe in them. But I hate twilight. -___-
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