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One mistake,
Can tear your relationship apart,
Can make you lose everything you loved,
Can tear your hopes and dreams apart,
One mistake that's all it takes.

One mistake,
Then everything goes down hill,
You'r starts breaking,
Everyone around you shuts you out,
You're invisble,
One mistake that's all it takes.

One mistake,
That's all you need,
To ruin your life,
To make you life hell,
To make everything so confusing,
One mistake that's all it takes.

One mistake,
Can ruin your chances for everything,
Can ruin your chances of succeding,
Can ruin friendships,
Can ruin lives,
One mistake that's all it takes.
Umm, I was just thinking about things, and well this came out of me... lol i'm not sure if I like it...
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gold-rose Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
nice poem :)
and unfortunatly you're right...one mistake is enough for others to point you with the finger and to ruin everything, but to convince someone that you're a good person you have to do like 100 good things...
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mandyc Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2008
yes, ik how you feel. :D thank you 4 ur comment :D
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i-nsertnameher-e Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008
This has happened to me a lot, and while it wrecked somethings, its helped to make some stronger. Very beautiful poem, thank you. :hug:
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mandyc Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008
welcome, and thanks 4 the comment :D
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american18076 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008
Wow... very touching.
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mandyc Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008
thank you, i'm glad you liked it :D
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KatiesPhotography Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008
I'm wondering what kind of mistake that would be...

Lovely poem dear. :heart:
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mandyc Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008
thanks :D
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surfnmurf333 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008
well..i can tell u this..i've been there...=)
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mandyc Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008
haven't we all? lol thanks 4 ur comment :D
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