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You're under my skin,
Trapped in my heart,
Trying to break out,
I don't want to be a part of my own hurt.

If your planning on leaving,
Do it as quickly as you can,
Don't linger around,
I will shove you away.

If your planning on staying,
Love me tender,
Love as I am,
Don't let me go.

Make up your mind,
Me or her,
Leave or stay,
Walk away or hold me close,
It's your choice.

Take it or leave it,
If it's time for you to go,
I'll wipe my tears and sew the hole in my heart,
If your planning on staying,
I will give you my whole heart.

Make up your mind.
©2008-2009 ~mandyc
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I really like this poem... I hate it when guys can't be direct...
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:D amazingly written. I'm not sure quite what it is, but something about this poem makes it one of my favourites... great job :D

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Don't take this personally, but you smell like an ice cube.
thank you very much, it didn't start so great but then I added more to it, i'm glad you liked it :D

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I love Patrick Hall more than we will ever know...
True love starts with a kiss.
DAMN IT!!!!! I lost a penny
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Don't take this personally, but you smell like an ice cube.

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