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Dreams,
So random,
So special,
So emotional,
So pure.

Dreams,
How often do they come true?
You hope and wish with all your life,
That one day the dream that you've always hid will come true,
But will it?

Dreams are unpredictable,
Dreams could take a lifetime to fulfill,
Dreams could take everything from you,
Dreams could take every ounce you got to fulfill.

It takes more effort than you could ever imagine,
It could cause so many heartbreaks,
So many holes in your heart,
So many tears that you will always feel wet.

Dreams can twist your mind,
Dreams can scare you,
Break your heart,
Foresee the future,
Show you painful things from your past,
Or give you hopes for the future.

Wherever your dream leads you,
I hope you can find your back,
Because thing goes sour,
You'll need to get things back on track,
Rebuild your dream,
And begin anew.
This is about what dreams are in this lifetime, i'm not really sure if I like it...
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caradecunha Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I liked it alot, very true...

hmmm... one thing I thought is that even though all that actually happens when you do accomplish your dream, after many haertbreaks and failed tries, the pleasure is even greater then it would be without all the suffering. .... just a thought (though I dont think you wanted to show that)
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mandyc Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010
I kinda was trying to say that, kinda not
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caradecunha Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe yeah I imagined... it just came to me since I was thinking of dreams XD
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AstridTragikz Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
i love it ;o
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mandyc Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
thanks :)
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Eviler-Kitty Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010
This is really good....
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mandyc Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010
thanks
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MariaLalala Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010
Wonderful. Can I put it in my journal? i love it :3
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010
umm no please don't, u can put in the link in or feature it if u want.
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AutumnLee Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2009
I love this, It was great
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2009
thank you very much :) for a long time I wasn't sure if I liked it lol
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pyrosam Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2009   Writer
This is awesome :)
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mandyc Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009
thank you :)
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DreamMaker-Club Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2008
if you like dream stories and art how about join my club :icondreammaker-club: id love u to join:D
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mandyc Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2008
ok, thanks, i will :D
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tehzombieanimegirl Featured By Owner May 27, 2008
love it. love all your work ^^
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mandyc Featured By Owner May 27, 2008
thank you :D
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TheBookWritersClub Featured By Owner May 26, 2008
Can we put this on the website? Its amazing and has so much truth and feeling behind it.
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mandyc Featured By Owner May 27, 2008
yes you can and thank you very much :D :hug:
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TwistedTranquility Featured By Owner May 26, 2008   Writer
This is pretty good. I will say I can\'t write poetry and I\'m a writer myself. So you have a advantage over me.
This is so true, I\'m going to fav.
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mandyc Featured By Owner May 26, 2008
thank you :hug:
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kayla13138 Featured By Owner May 26, 2008   Writer
I love it, it is so true!
:highfive:
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mandyc Featured By Owner May 26, 2008
lol thank you :hug:
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iluvkenny35 Featured By Owner May 26, 2008
i like eet 8DDD
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mandyc Featured By Owner May 26, 2008
thanks :hug:
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