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He’s in love with her,
He’ll never be in love with me,
My heart filled to the brim with jealously,
I can’t stop myself,
I can’t stop talking to him,
There’s something about him,
But now I am invisible to him,
I always will be.

I try not to fall in love with him,
I fall way too easily,
I am trapped,
I am ripped,
I am broken,
I am tortured by every word that escapes from his lips.

I tell myself I don’t want to through this again,
He has no idea the feelings I hide,
My heart is breaking,
I wish he’d stop leading me on.

I try to resist,
But he brings me back,
Like a lighting bug in the palm of his hand,
Until he smashes me open,
He’s on his way.

Ignore him,
Forget him,
Don’t let yourself fall,
Don’t make yourself one of his problems,
Don’t fall in love.
I was going to call this Don't Fall In Love but I kind of thought that sent the wrong message.. but yeah.. Complicated shit.. but yeah. I hope you like it...
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:icontheblueangel:
TheBlueAngel Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009   Writer
it's really good...
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009
thank you :)
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destructivedestiny Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009
sometimes it is better to fall in love with the wrong person and be hurt and learn than to fall in love with the right person the first time and be shocked when you get divorced or have relationship problems.

it's very good at conveying emotion
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009
thank you :hug:
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tanafeyroyale Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I know how this feels way too much
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2008
ya... well it's over now... but i hope your situation improves and thanks 4 the comment! :D
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tanafeyroyale Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome and I'm working on it, hold feelings die hard
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2008
indeed
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deathclouds Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008
nice
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008
thank you :D
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mode-de-vie Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008  Student Writer
Love is always a tricky situation. But eventually, I think everyone finds what they're looking for. ;)

This is well written. I love the raw emotion in it, the little bits of advice. Good work. :thumbsup:
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008
thank you :D
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:iconsephiroththepure:
SephirothThePure Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
Very nicely done. I hope that everything works out in the end for you.
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
lol, yea. acutally ther person ended up finding out and well blahhh, but it ended up ok, he ended up feelin worse than I did... :O
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:iconsephiroththepure:
SephirothThePure Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
lol, always better when the guy ends up feeling worse, I guess. (This coming from a guy). Course, that's just my opinion.
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
lol you like feelin bad? :D
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:iconsephiroththepure:
SephirothThePure Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
No, but I think it's better for the guy to feel bad than the girl. I guess I'm just an old-fashioned romantic. I can't stand to see girls in pain - physical or emotional.
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
aww i think that's cute. :D
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SephirothThePure Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
:) Thanks.
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Forgottenangel777 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2008
Awww. I LOVE it, seriously. I've felt this way more than once before. Have to fav. it. ;)
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2008
thanks :D
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:iconamerican18076:
american18076 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2008
Very nicely written.
Reminds me of what I'm going through. >_>
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2008
thanks :D
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:iconlelabelle:
LelaBelle Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008   Writer
but he knows i love him :cries: and he will never love me....sorry ^^; i love it...yeah.
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008
lol, thanks 4 the comment :D
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:iconlelabelle:
LelaBelle Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008   Writer
you're welcome ^^
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DancingCorpse1000 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow i love it.
ive been through this point MANY times. lol.
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
yea, it really suxs. But I guess i'll get through it somehow. :D thanks 4 the comment!
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DancingCorpse1000 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
youre welcomes. XD.
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kayla13138 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008   Writer
Awwww, I had this happen once, maybe, sorta........
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
ok, i guess everyone has been through this at one point. but yea... thanks 4 the comment! :D
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:iconxxxtayleighxxx:
xXxtayleighxXx Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
omg. this relates soooooo much to me!
and i know. its so sad going through this shit!
:(
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
yea... it is. I guess I'll figure out somthing eventually... but thanks for the comment :)
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:iconxxxtayleighxxx:
xXxtayleighxXx Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
if you do figure something out, let me know. i could use the advise!
nd your welcome! :)
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:iconmandyc:
mandyc Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
lol, ok :D
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:iconxxxtayleighxxx:
xXxtayleighxXx Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
:)
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