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Daddy hits,
Mommy screams,
Brother stabs,
And Sissy cleans.


And soon as she’s done,
It starts all over again,
Guns are shot,
And you bleed,
You can’t trust anyone it seems.


You’ll go to the hospital,
They’ll mend your heart,
But when you come home,
It will fall apart.


You never even have time to go to the bathroom,
Or enjoy the life you’ve been given,
Because as soon as you walk through the door,
The torture starts,
And you’re falling apart.


Someday it will end,
Your broken heart shall be mend,
They’ll pay for the pain caused,
And you will not be abused anymore.
This poem is deciated to all those who have been abused in their lives.

Deciated to: Patrick Hall, and Jim Coomer
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TheBurningHand Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Student General Artist
I was bullied by other children from kindergarten to fourth grade mentally and physically, and the school did nothing. I had a step father that acted as if I wasn't there, praising my sisters (His children) and ignoring me. My real father yelled at me and treated me like I was stupid, using everything I did or said as a reason for him to have full custody of me against my will.

It's especially funny because the entire time, he tried to hide that all from me. And I always knew.

He never believed me when I told him that I was hurt, if he did, he blamed it on my mother, NOT the actual people.
I had to pretend to be someone I wasn't for my entire childhood.
I tried to tell him about something important once-- big mistake. He used it against my mother (big surprise :sarcasm:)

I'm scared of everyone else now, scared that they'll do something. Scared that they'll judge me.

I hate myself now. I'm too overweight, I'm not smart enough, my writings are terrible, I can't draw, I'm ugly, etc.

I'm always on the lookout now, watching over everyone I love and care about, making sure that they don't go through anything like what I did. I don't want them to be like this.




Sorry for the long comment. By the way, I loved your poem. :iconloveitplz:
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mandyc Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
Thanks! I appericate it I wrote it when I was really young, I think 14. I went through all that same stuff and my Dad is a complete psycho. Don't doubt yourself and don't let negative people bring you down.
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quiblanc Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student General Artist
revenge
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Silvereyedfreak01 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
I get hit and teased and yelled and swore at buts thats how people show love right?
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mandyc Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012
yea I don't really think so
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Silvereyedfreak01 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012
I know but I want them to love me so much it hurts. They work me like a servant pit me on diets call me the r-word fat etc. Hurt me let my sibs torture cause I'm different but I can't hate them or bring myself to tell someone I'm scared of the outcome my life may be a nightmare but I don't want to lose wat I got. Wat do think I should do? Sorry word vomit!
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mandyc Featured By Owner May 5, 2012
you probaly need to tell someone and get out of there
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Silvereyedfreak01 Featured By Owner May 5, 2012
Im trying it not working I will probably not live to see my birtday.
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zooloo12345 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
MY DAD HITS ME SOMETIMES, BUT NOTHING EVER GETS THAT OUT OF HAND. I HOPE THAT ALL THE VICTIMS OF ABUSE FIND HOPE AND SOON GET WELL!!
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Miss-Bill-Kaulitz Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011
very nice
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